"Currently posting the Alignment Minicomic! Takes place between Chapters 1 and 2! Enjoy!"

First Impressions

posted 9th Oct 2012, 4:08 PM

First Impressions
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9th Oct 2012, 4:08 PM

JRChace

Perhaps this is the adventurer Goredamn has been waiting for! Time to inact dungeon mastering expertise upon this foolish hero!

I'm behind on the big fanart thing-a-ma-bob, so I'll post an update on Fridays page instead. Sorry about that guys. I'll do more than 5 this time to make up for it!

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9th Oct 2012, 4:25 PM

MeatPopsicle199

The perspective on panel five looks great!

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9th Oct 2012, 5:53 PM

JRChace

Thanks! The camera man is starting to use more dynamic angles! XD

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view LooeyQ's profile

9th Oct 2012, 4:54 PM

LooeyQ

Things are about to get crazy go nuts!!!
Meat Popsicle Beat me to it but I agree, the perspective shot looks awesome!!!! Your color and line work just gets better and better!

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9th Oct 2012, 5:55 PM

JRChace

Thanks, man! The next step for me is shading, but I'm holding out on that until chapter 2. I'm glad everything else is working out well!

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view dragonpenguin13's profile

9th Oct 2012, 4:55 PM

dragonpenguin13

I love the adventurer's face in panel three.

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view JRChace's profile

9th Oct 2012, 5:56 PM

JRChace

I had to have a derp face somewhere!

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view Iraku's profile

9th Oct 2012, 5:36 PM

Iraku

Possibly Formidable.

I mean a headshot's usually an instant KO!

Just Gotta love the derpy face from panel 3.

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9th Oct 2012, 5:59 PM

JRChace

Judging the derpyness of the adventurer, I'd bet he's first level. He'll need a few more headshot's for a KO! *shields face*

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view RedAuthar's profile

9th Oct 2012, 5:40 PM

RedAuthar

Revenge is a dish best served cold....throw the chair at him.

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view JRChace's profile

9th Oct 2012, 6:01 PM

JRChace

Reading this put a picture in my mind of Goredamn shotputting the chair out of the castle XD

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view Dodom's profile

9th Oct 2012, 5:46 PM

Dodom

Does the weird shape of his eye represent a tear?

It's ok Gordy, chicks dig men who are in touch with their emotions.
Hmm, now I'm wondering how he would react if a girl told him he was cute...

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9th Oct 2012, 6:06 PM

JRChace

Yep! That's a tear. I settled on the cartoony tear extending eye since detailed tears wouldn't be seen under his hood!

Gordy's true love is with evil, of course. Though he wouldn't mind complements from adoring girls XD

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view chris-tar's profile

9th Oct 2012, 6:14 PM

chris-tar

The wizard looks like he has down syndrome.

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9th Oct 2012, 7:19 PM

JRChace

He doesn't sell the smart wizard type at all does he? XD

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view Draginbeard's profile

9th Oct 2012, 6:43 PM

Draginbeard

Great page. Have to cast my vote for panel 3 and the nave with the Marty Feldman eyes! I look forward to seeing you add shading in! You are doing a really great job on this comic! =D

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9th Oct 2012, 7:21 PM

JRChace

Thanks so much! Shading will definitely pop the characters/backgrounds out more. I'm looking forward to it too! :D

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view Centcomm's profile

9th Oct 2012, 7:22 PM

Centcomm

wow lots of comments - Awesome - wow .. at last a good guy gore can trouce .. you know there might even be a bounty on that idiot .. stupid mages are dangerous!!!

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12th Oct 2012, 1:22 PM

CrackaWindow

SURELY Goredamn can take on such a clueless foe... Right? But I guess Dave did take down a moose earlier, and im starting to wonder if Goredamn is on the same skill level as said moose...

(loving this comic. It's such a fun read and the artwork is so clean and nice.)

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13th Oct 2012, 5:04 PM

JRChace

Thanks! And perhaps the moose should join forces with Goredamn against this foe! Or maybe vise versa!

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23rd Aug 2013, 12:43 AM

Marisa

That third panel made me LOL, coming right after the comment in the second. For real.

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