"Currently posting the Alignment Minicomic! Takes place between Chapters 1 and 2! Enjoy!"

Dead End

posted 23rd Nov 2012, 4:07 PM

Dead End
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23rd Nov 2012, 4:07 PM

JRChace

Nothing suspicious about that! Not at all!

I usually don't like to point out flaws, but that first panel camera angle doesn't flow right at all with the previous pages. It looks like Tim is in the entrance of the dungeon still, where as he's supposed to be farther in after opening many, many doors.

I kinda fixed it by adding some distinctive lettering to the doors in front. Aghhh, I noticed it when I finished too. Oh well. Lesson learned I suppose!

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23rd Nov 2012, 4:45 PM

RedAuthar

Ha ha. Well if we were perfect with out comics.....

Treasure outta nowhere....must have solved a puzzle.

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23rd Nov 2012, 10:30 PM

JRChace

A legend of zelda sound effect should of played here, but even Dungeon Masters must abide to copyright law XD

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view Centcomm's profile

23rd Nov 2012, 4:56 PM

Centcomm

wow .. is he really really that dumb. wonder what his int score is ..

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23rd Nov 2012, 10:32 PM

JRChace

I think I'll post Tim and Dave's D&D sheets as an extra between chapter 1 and 2. Show everybody how much they are/were capable of! :P

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23rd Nov 2012, 10:37 PM

Centcomm

I think thats a awesome idea what about gordys?

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23rd Nov 2012, 10:53 PM

JRChace

Dungeon Masters haven't a character sheet, since they're not adventurers. Their power is shrouded in mystery and you'll find out more about it later in the comic! However, that's not to say Gordy is actually an official Dungeon Master. The green lady back at the Department didn't give him what he wanted after all XD

I could do Skirmish's monster stats, though. Maybe even those three experienced adventurers too. Then everyone can throw Alignment characters in their campaigns to play as/slaughter! XD

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23rd Nov 2012, 11:00 PM

Centcomm

hahah - I like this idea .. now if I could just find a game..

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view LooeyQ's profile

23rd Nov 2012, 6:02 PM

LooeyQ

Hahahaha,
Pretty treasure in a creepy dungeon? Looks good to me!
:D

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23rd Nov 2012, 10:33 PM

JRChace

Always! I mean, who traps a chest that comes from a trap door?

Thats like... way too many traps!

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view Iraku's profile

23rd Nov 2012, 6:27 PM

Iraku

It's actually one of those monster chests from video games. Just gotta be. I hate those things.

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23rd Nov 2012, 10:34 PM

JRChace

Oh those things scare me. Especially in the game "Dark Souls" if you ever played it.

I learned a valuable lesson to whack chests before opening them in that game!

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23rd Nov 2012, 6:39 PM

Dodom

The real treasure was inside of him all along, it was supposed to be a spiritual adventure!
For Tim, it's harder to understand, but the coming trap might help spilling whatever he's got in this glorious gut of his!

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23rd Nov 2012, 10:36 PM

JRChace

To find his inner self and to see his innard self! Then he becomes a spirit! Spiritual adventure, indeed! XD

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23rd Nov 2012, 6:56 PM

Draginbeard

wow, so far everything has been working the way it was designed! But Tim...he might be too dumb to set the trap off!

Head turn in the last panel, and the first panel with the doors were excellent!

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23rd Nov 2012, 10:42 PM

JRChace

Just like D&D, the Dungeon Master always finds a way to lead his adventurers to where he wants them to be! For Tim, it was a bit more difficult.

I liked that head turn too! I drew it quick actually and felt like I rolled a critical art check or something! As for the first panel, I like how it looks but the functionality of it (as I wrote in the page notes) didn't mix well.

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23rd Nov 2012, 10:17 PM

RedAuthar

Oh wait...I get it....Dave will be CRUSHED... ha ha.

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23rd Nov 2012, 10:45 PM

JRChace

Yup! Little irony joke there, but I have a question: do you think you would of caught that joke easier if "crushed" was in bold text? I was deciding on it but I thought it stuck out too much, but I didn't want people to miss it either :P

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24th Nov 2012, 3:41 PM

RedAuthar

Italics maybe?

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