"Currently posting the Alignment Minicomic! Takes place between Chapters 1 and 2! Enjoy!"

Blown Away

posted 30th Mar 2013, 2:01 PM

Blown Away
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view JRChace's profile

30th Mar 2013, 2:01 PM

JRChace

Guess who?

Shading is slowly creeping in on these newer pages! I really love the second panel: serious Ghaston is serious. I tried something new with the last panel and had it be read right to left instead, using the word bubbles to lure you into going that direction. I felt it made Goredamn's movement more natural as he got hit from the right, that he'd move left across the page. Tell me if you got caught up at the last panel at all, its a mostly easy fix to flip the panel to read the other way.

In other news, I'm still attempting at keeping a pace on updating! If all goes well, this chapter will be wrapped up in two weeks or less! Then it begins.... muhahahah!

ahem... y'know... making buffer for chapter 2 and extra stuff...

MUHAHAHAHA

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30th Mar 2013, 2:26 PM

ryuskrew

I'm absolutely in love with this page. The effort that went into this is showing. The composition of the panels, to how different each one looks, to how clean your word bubbles and everything is..I'm beginning to fall in love XD

Also, poor Goredamn. HE WILL WIN. ONE DAY.

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5th Apr 2013, 11:10 PM

JRChace

Thanks, man! That means a lot to me! Hopefully the next pages follow suit and looks just as good :D

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view LooeyQ's profile

30th Mar 2013, 3:48 PM

LooeyQ

This page is awesome!
And the shading is top notch! :D

The dungeon master shall become the dungeon adventurerer! Lovin it!

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view JRChace's profile

5th Apr 2013, 11:13 PM

JRChace

Great to hear the shading looks good! I'll have to experiment more with it as I go on!

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view Draginbeard's profile

30th Mar 2013, 3:59 PM

Draginbeard

Oh yeah, loving that second panel! The whole page came off fantastic!

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view JRChace's profile

5th Apr 2013, 11:16 PM

JRChace

Sweet! Glad it came out well! At this rate this chapter will end with a large contrast from the beginning pages. Lots more effects and composition now!

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view ranger_brianna_new's profile

30th Mar 2013, 4:30 PM

ranger_brianna_new

Apparently, I can think like Goredamn, since he thought he could do exactly what I said he was going to try and do. :P

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view JRChace's profile

5th Apr 2013, 11:22 PM

JRChace

Think like Goredamn, eh? Hmm...

*Takes off Gordy's hood*

My god! It was Ranger the whole time! I should have known!

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view Dodom's profile

30th Mar 2013, 6:22 PM

Dodom

That... is not a giant ogre!

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view JRChace's profile

5th Apr 2013, 11:24 PM

JRChace

...its a space station!!!

Obscure Star Wars reference of the day!

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view The Chessmaster's profile

30th Mar 2013, 9:03 PM

The Chessmaster

Hmm... That guy who flung him out... Is that Balthzzalagog, Destroyer of Worlds? This seems a lot like comic 5.

But still, Skirmish is safe! YAYYYYYY!

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5th Apr 2013, 11:27 PM

JRChace

Hmmm! That "whap" is familiar isn't it!

Skirmish was but an example of Ghaston's power. Kobolds aren't very useful to a legit Dungeon Mastering genius!

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view cachway's profile

30th Mar 2013, 10:45 PM

cachway

Your bottom panel works perfectly.

At least that ended well for Goredamn. Ghaston could easily wipe him out right about now.

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view JRChace's profile

5th Apr 2013, 11:30 PM

JRChace

Excellent! I'm glad it does! The bottom panel looked real good on my thumbnail page but got a little more complicated looking on the finished one.

Goredamn is luckier than he thinks, even though he's been at the short end of the stick for awhile now!

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30th Mar 2013, 10:52 PM

RedAuthar

Barely even made it through the door man....
Ghaston is really good....er....bad.....

.....

YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN!

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5th Apr 2013, 11:34 PM

JRChace

Technically, when Goredamn Dungeon Mastered, Dave didn't even get to the door!

... but I don't think killing Dave impresses anyone though. Ghaston still wins in the end XD

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view RedAuthar's profile

6th Apr 2013, 9:48 AM

RedAuthar

Ah but technically that encounter was a party of two and Tim destroyed the place...not purposely of course.

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view Iraku's profile

30th Mar 2013, 10:53 PM

Iraku

Gordy, just wow. Your skills are reaching a new high, you made it through the door, without dying!

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5th Apr 2013, 11:37 PM

JRChace

Another thing to add to his Resume! That'll go just above killing Dave and right under surviving choking on own laughter.

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view Nataas's profile

4th Apr 2013, 1:03 PM

Nataas

Do I have internet back? Nope, Chuck Tes-AHEM! Unfortunately no, I have to use he library's internet for the time being.

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view JRChace's profile

5th Apr 2013, 11:38 PM

JRChace

You remembered to bookmark Alignment on all the computers, right?

RIGHT?

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view BuilderJim's profile

7th Apr 2013, 6:34 PM

BuilderJim

Phew, thank goodness Skirmish wasn't harmed.

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